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by saberard
Mon Jun 15, 2009 5:15 pm
Forum: The Bridge: Discuss an Astronomy Picture of the Day
Topic: Streaming Dark Nebulas near B44 (APOD 2009 June 15)
Replies: 5
Views: 1928

Streaming Dark Nebulas near B44

"Dark dust lit by the bright yellow star Antares highlight this photogenic starscape of the southern sky." Simple verb-subject agreement is not rocket science; but I frequently see this sort of thing on this site. I encourage the learned writers to proof-read. Let's fight dumbing down, peo...
by saberard
Tue Mar 31, 2009 6:26 pm
Forum: The Bridge: Discuss an Astronomy Picture of the Day
Topic: The Tarantula's Heart (2009 March 31)
Replies: 18
Views: 1930

Re: The Tarantula's Heart (2009 March 31)

You are of course right , Chris, that grammatical lapses cannot tell all; and perhaps in this one instance it seems that I am making a mountain out of a molehill. However, whenever I read these interesting little blurbs and find a jarring inattentiveness to very basic grammar -- such as, here, lack ...
by saberard
Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:21 pm
Forum: The Bridge: Discuss an Astronomy Picture of the Day
Topic: The Tarantula's Heart (2009 March 31)
Replies: 18
Views: 1930

Re: The Tarantula's Heart (2009 March 31)

"In the heart of monstrous Tarantula Nebula lies huge bubbles of energetic gas..." Despite my occasional castigations, the writers of these blurbs still seem unable or unwilling consistently to write correct prose--perhaps the sign of the narrow scientist unwilling to consider humane conce...
by saberard
Mon Nov 17, 2008 6:16 pm
Forum: The Bridge: Discuss an Astronomy Picture of the Day
Topic: APOD: HR 8799: Multi-planet Star System (2008 Nov 17)
Replies: 14
Views: 3157

Re: HR 8799: Multi-planet Star System (2008 Nov 17)

"...it is a clear demonstration that complex planetary systems exists..."

No comment. :?
by saberard
Tue Sep 23, 2008 6:00 pm
Forum: The Bridge: Discuss an Astronomy Picture of the Day
Topic: Eggs in orbit (APOD 23 Sep 2008)
Replies: 26
Views: 10578

Haumea

These are not random postings. They are comments written for public consumption. By the way, the problem was that the sentences made no grammatical sense, not that there were any misspellings.
Sincerely.
by saberard
Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:20 pm
Forum: The Bridge: Discuss an Astronomy Picture of the Day
Topic: Eggs in orbit (APOD 23 Sep 2008)
Replies: 26
Views: 10578

Haumea

"Haumea's smooth but oblong shape make it extremely unusual. Along one direction, Haumea is significantly longer than Pluto, while in another direction Haumea has an extent very similar to Pluto, while in the third direction is much smaller." Am I the only one who would like the writers of...
by saberard
Sat Jan 12, 2008 10:02 pm
Forum: The Bridge: Discuss an Astronomy Picture of the Day
Topic: Polaris Dust Nebula (APOD 11 Jan 2008)
Replies: 1
Views: 1534

Polaris Dust Nebula (APOD 11 Jan 2008)

"The combined light of the Milky Way stars are reflected by the dusty, galactic cirrus,..."
Excuse me, but the light of the stars IS reflected. Let's get some accuracy in our writing, people.
by saberard
Tue Jul 03, 2007 5:31 pm
Forum: The Asterisk Café: Discuss Anything Astronomy Related
Topic: Scientists should know grammar.
Replies: 12
Views: 4339

Scientists should know grammar.

The author wrote "lays" for "lies"--a common mistake; but accuracy is important across disciplines. :?