run-on sentence?! (APOD 3 Dec 2006)

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run-on sentence?! (APOD 3 Dec 2006)

by ddrrambo » Mon Dec 04, 2006 2:56 am

"In 100 million years or so it will likely crash into the surface or be shattered by stress caused by the relentless tidal forces, the debris forming a ring around Mars. "
yeah... that's a run-on sentence... it should be more like

In 100 million years or so it will likely crash into the surface or be shattered by stress caused by the relentless tidal forces; the debris will form a ring around Mars.

anyway, someone should put a div box and put all the links to every APOD post in them... it'll make the archive page much nicer and shorter!!!

it's not hard!!!

div width:#px; height:#px; overflow:auto

that's all.

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