by Tony Wells » Tue Nov 01, 2011 9:52 pm
While APOD's photos are extraordinary, the grammar and punctuation used in the explanation is, often, very ordinary. That from the 31st of October is an appropriate example of the latter with missing punctuation marks and words. To help you in the future, have added four commas and four additional words in upper case.
Explanation: Spooky shapes seem to haunt this starry expanse, drifting through the night in the royal constellation Cepheus. Of course, the shapes are cosmic dust clouds, faintly visible in dimly reflected starlight. Far from your own neighborhood on planet Earth, they lurk at the edge of the Cepheus Flare molecular cloud complex, some 1,200 light-years away. Over TWO light-years across, the ghostly nebula and relatively isolated Bok globule, also known as vdB 141 or Sh2-136, ARE near the center of the field. The core of the dark cloud, on the right, is collapsing and is likely TO BE a binary star system in the early stages of formation. Even so, if the spooky shapes could talk, they might well wish you a happy Halloween.
While APOD's photos are extraordinary, the grammar and punctuation used in the explanation is, often, very ordinary. That from the 31st of October is an appropriate example of the latter with missing punctuation marks and words. To help you in the future, have added four commas and four additional words in upper case.
Explanation: Spooky shapes seem to haunt this starry expanse, drifting through the night in the royal constellation Cepheus. Of course, the shapes are cosmic dust clouds, faintly visible in dimly reflected starlight. Far from your own neighborhood on planet Earth, they lurk at the edge of the Cepheus Flare molecular cloud complex, some 1,200 light-years away. Over TWO light-years across, the ghostly nebula and relatively isolated Bok globule, also known as vdB 141 or Sh2-136, ARE near the center of the field. The core of the dark cloud, on the right, is collapsing and is likely TO BE a binary star system in the early stages of formation. Even so, if the spooky shapes could talk, they might well wish you a happy Halloween.